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| Blinne Ainsley 2004-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this one. Strangely detailed without trying... I especially enjoy: "Memories become our skin/.Our nerves, our synapses, our soul" I don't know if you're just not a fan of punctuation at the end of lines, but you might want to try it. |