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| PaulAsaran 2004-07-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis was quite different from what I expected. I feel sorry for the person. I liked the way you maneuvered the words, too. All in all, a good read. |
| pneumothorax 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThe start had a difference of line length but I thought it was pretty interesting. Especially the line movement parts - definately different lol :) |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-03 ch 1, | abusevery nice formatting there! cool poem too! |