Wait I know what this is! This is a verbal duplicate of the movie "2001 A Space Odyssey" or something of that like. Describing the fundamental nature of the entire universe in the context of a small and insignificant event within said universe.
Stunning Stunning Stunning!

This is the first story of yours that I am confident was more style than substance. But what style it was!
"The lizard has no teeth and the lamb has no spine. The bear's claws are sunk deep into the flesh of the fatted calf, and the children cry out that the sky is falling. The dead corpse of the lion rises to sing sad songs of ones that have gone on before. Watch the bones of your ancestors scream in agony and cry out for vengeance. They have disowned you."
Yeah that's style all right. Stunning as usual.

Very beautiful.........you put this humble beginner in her rightful place........[at the computer trying to learn to write 'em like that]......

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD Story!

o.. damn... dat wuz... damn...

reelie good..

Vivid and surreal, and truthful in its abstract way. Excellent.

this has to be one of the greatest visual trips in literature, Ive ever read. Awsome use of vocab for evoking emotion great job, very poetic...