|Reviews for Avian Soul|
| Shinji Boi69 6/6/04 . chapter 1
This poem is very good. I love the repitition used. It's almost professional. Great job. Keep up the awsome work.
| invalid id 6/5/04 . chapter 1
I honestly can't think of anything to say, you are just simply outstanding as a writer and should get your own book.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 6/3/04 . chapter 1
*claps* wonderful as always
| danny 6/3/04 . chapter 1
i love the repeated words. i think that you have a theme of soul throughout all of your poems. it's terrific!
| catseyeview 6/3/04 . chapter 1
I love what you did with this. We often look to the flame but this is a reminder of how delicate that flame is, how easy it can be extinguished. Nice work.
| WakeRobin 6/3/04 . chapter 1
Wow that's quite a poem. I really like it though it is sad. Love your work!