This poem is very good. I love the repitition used. It's almost professional. Great job. Keep up the awsome work.
Jake.

I honestly can't think of anything to say, you are just simply outstanding as a writer and should get your own book.

*claps* wonderful as always

i love the repeated words. i think that you have a theme of soul throughout all of your poems. it's terrific!

I love what you did with this. We often look to the flame but this is a reminder of how delicate that flame is, how easy it can be extinguished. Nice work.

Wow that's quite a poem. I really like it though it is sad. Love your work!