Love how you wrote it out.

Very interesting. I love the rhyming couplets in each line. Entertaining!
Short and sweet i say =)
hehe, i hope you get a chance to review some of my recent work.

I just looked back at the shows you've been to, and it made this poem make sense...Very Emo *winces* Your writing is very good, though, so it makes up for it

Very cute. She breaks your heart, and then wants you back, and you don't want to go. Nice.

wow. u have great word expression; i like it a lot. do u tend to write from experience? just curious. oh and thank u for ur review by the way 'luv.

Hey i really like this one, i dont know if you've heard of mike skinner and "the streets"? but this sounds a lot like one of his lyrics! I'm not too fond of rhyming "in" with "in" but it works in that way

the point is short and sweet...and it has a sense of a feeling to be forgotten. good good

She calls in. She's balling. I tell her to quit stalling
... you mean bawling or bailing??
I lay awake for her calling.. lie
I absolutely love the rhyming!! its amazing... very sad ending but somewhat hopeful