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Reviews For: Naissance: The Goddess of Hate

Juni
2005-01-23
ch 1,
abuseVery cool concept, I'm interested to see where you'll go with this.
vanburen
2004-06-06
ch 2,
abuseoh, neat, she can fly. I don't read a lot of stories about magic & stuff, but you've got good characters here, and a good plot setup. I like how you lay down the character background early in the story so we can get to know them better! Nice work.
Eagle Seance
2004-06-03
ch 2,
abuseSomething different and it's good that i am aged over 18 ; ) Good story. I can't suggest any area for improvement except for the spacing of the paragraphs. Sexy story (ha that's the first time i've used the term), keep writing!
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