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| Juni 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery cool concept, I'm interested to see where you'll go with this. |
| vanburen 2004-06-06 ch 2, | abuseoh, neat, she can fly. I don't read a lot of stories about magic & stuff, but you've got good characters here, and a good plot setup. I like how you lay down the character background early in the story so we can get to know them better! Nice work. |
| Eagle Seance 2004-06-03 ch 2, | abuseSomething different and it's good that i am aged over 18 ; ) Good story. I can't suggest any area for improvement except for the spacing of the paragraphs. Sexy story (ha that's the first time i've used the term), keep writing! |