Great poem Randomgoth ... I really liked reading it ... I'm actually quite astonished by your artwork ...
your cousin, keltica

Nice one my random friend...I am kinda perplexed by this one though...it could be about God or it could be about some random dude strolling through Central ParK.
Your Perplexed Warrior,
HTW

This is something special and beautiful... there's such an intimacy in it even when mentions of 'love' comes only at the end.

Aw. How tweet:)
I like.

Beautiful. I like the many different words you find for the colour red, its velvety richness. Also the dreamlike, epic quality of the piece, and the way you work with repetition to enhance that heavily-scented, dreamlike quality. Great job.

One very awesomely excellent piece of poetry.