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| butterflydreaming 2004-06-05 ch 1,   | When I was 15, adults used to say to me "you have your head on your shoulders!", very impressed that I seemed to know myself. I think that maybe you really do. This is such a good message... I hope it reaches a few people, and makes them think. I hope that you also can keep your feelings and philosophy now clear in your mind, as you continue on on your own journey. |
| through these jaded eyes 2004-06-04 ch 1, | deep. very deep. its cool! |
| Chains of Melody 2004-06-04 ch 1, | Wow. This is brilliant. You used simple words, yet you are able to bring out your feelings so perfectly well. I especially like how you placed emphasis on sentences by echoing them in the next. Would you be so kind as to review mine too? |