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| xbluxmoonx 2007-07-01 ch 1,  | abusei liked it lots. ^_^ crazy too. nice work! |
| The Silver Tiger 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abusewow nicely written it would be a good story to continue, but I guess somepeople love to leave others with a cliff hanger. I have read lots of books that have a cliff hanger and are very good books |
| An Inside Joke 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI think I like the "interview" parts more than the "flashback" part. I especially like Jennifer's thought processes. |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abusecool story, i felt like some parts could have been a bit more explored, his lashback, more emotions and/or tensions and undercurrents between the two, how she reacted to what he was saying during the interview, but it was an enjoyable read. thank you! |
| Disckord 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. It was interesting how he seemed to still have a heart and emotions. I was surprised he didn't change her, I was expecting him to, but then again it's always better whan the author does the unexpected. Kudos! |
| Nick Slaughter 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe story is well thought out and although not original, it brings fresh perspectives to an otherwise outdated story. I believe the story would be alot better if it were longer. Other than the length the story is very well thought out and put together. |
| CrazyPenLady/Murderer 2004-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHI FROM Alex! yeah im writing my friend. before i say anything let me say one thing(pause 4 dramatic effect), I LOVE MY INU-YASHA. so any way i liked the vampire, it was really easy to realate to him in some instances. but u coulndt have made it a little darker. guess not. dont write anything dark. that is my department! stay away. but it was good for a beginner. keep up the good work. |
| Singe 2004-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the story, I want to know what happens next. That can't be the last she hears from the vampire. Keep writing! ^_^ |
| Nightly Rain 2004-07-27 ch 1, | abusea great story! ^.^ what i like is that you used another author's idea yet you made it your own by making it quite different =) t'is awesome. -nightlyrain |
| demee 2004-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseplz continue or go on with it pl z pzl plzplzplzplz I'm jumping up and diown in anxoiusness!! |
| amy 2004-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha, not bad. i'll c if u write more later. bye, amy |
| Secret Sorrows 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abusethat was good, keep it up |
| fairy-tales345 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseHi! Good story. I'm obsessed with BTVS so this is just my kind of thing! Good try, Krystal! fairy-tales345 ((aka. Katie)) ps. fancy returning the favour and reading my debut story 'Rejected'? It's under BIOGRAPHY and GENERAL or just look me up in the search engine. :) |