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| magic jelliebeans 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI really love this story its hilarious! You should try and continue with it, turn it into a story rather than a one-shot, that would be awesome. |
| K.M.Mackenzie 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastically hilarious. I like what you've done with such an idea. And the quote really does wonders in drawing you in. |
| One-Hand Clap 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was... so funny! And quirky! And charming! The dialogue in itself was absoloutely beautiful. It was just so silly and... hilarious! I also loved Annie's little narration throughout. Escpecially at the end 'We're not schizophrenic, **'!. Haha! So favourited, obvisouly - Clap Trap, from Review Marathon |
| xoX-Magic-Q7-Xox 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abusei've never read anything like it before. i'm enthralled! |
| M. Massacre 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThere was only nineteen reviews: I had to even it out. But seriously. Amazing stuff. I laughed a lot, and sent it to all my people. |
| Professional scatterbrain 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseFacinating and brilliant. Wonderful work. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseSweet but confusing at times, but thats kind of the point, right? |
| silently watching 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it! That is such an interest take on a story! That's like, really cool, and the ending is sweet, too! You should write another thing with the same characters (all 3) I loved it so much! silently watching |
| DuchessYappingDog 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseOh? Setting herself for a break-up? I guess they're not together then? This is so... confusing. |
| for keeps 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abuseHaha, this is the second time I read this story, reading it once didn't give me time to absorbe its brilliance completely, I had to take it in small doses, lol. It's sweet and a little on the weird side. I *adore* it, and I love its structure. It is perfect, and it makes a fun, cute little one-parter, but you could triple its awesomeness if it had multiple chapters as well. This is amazing, its one of the best pieces I've ever read on fictionpress. You deserve a round of applause for your outstanding creativity. I'm favorting this. |
| whacked 2006-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are master. Need I say more? No. But i will...this was adorable in its own right , I loved Annie and I adored their conversations haha- I will now do that thing where you copy paste favourite lines from the story (though throughout the entire thing my fist was stuffed in my mouth in order to keep the giggles in cause I am supposed to be working, anyway i don't think it worked cause my supervisor kept glancing at me with a look that blatantly said What-are-you-doing?Because I don't remember givging you amusing work)" Wait why doesn’t he like me, then? I’m way better than you. Seriously."" This is the part where you giggle or something. No wait. Please don’t.""Oh my god Caitlin what are you doing stop it I’m going to pee or cry or something."And is it just me or do I keep giving you long reviews which are quickly becoming redundant with me just fawning over your work like some pre-tween fan girl?I apologise but i think you will see more of these as I continue to read your work... |
| aurora borealis 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, that was so cute and weird and yay! I loved it! :)(Okay, that was very ditzy, but I need to be silly sometimes. And there's nothing anyone can do about it. So there!)Anyway. That little scene was so cute. I absolutely loved it. Nice stuff. :) |
| skywriter-x 2006-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseyet again, brilliant. this was veyr quirky and wlel done. thanks for making my reading time a pleasure =) |
| Frore 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuse“Well. Leave it to me to hate everyone but a weird schizophrenic chick.” We’re not schizophrenic, **. Hahahaha! God, I love you Shampoo Suicide. This reminds me of so many rambles I've had in my head (and out loud...). Very nicely done. |
| strawberries'n'sugar 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is kinda sweet. How badly do I wish something like that would actually happen? Awesome writing. Kinda funny again. B. |