LOL This was simply hilarious! Haha I love Annie! The two (or three in a sense ^.^) characters you portaryed were amazing! I was laughing so hard at the end!

It was utterly cute! Plain and simple :)

Oh my. It took me about a good 30 seconds to stop laughing when I finished this story, and another 30 seconds after I read this line again "Oh my god Caitlin what are you doing stop it I’m going to pee or cry or something.". Honestly your stories are hilarity(yes I know that's not a word) even when there not supposed to be. I read Teenage Poetry and I kinda laughed at David's psychosis anyway back to the point, I liked this. It was interesting and if I ever have to be a schizophrenic I hope my other voices are as funny and all around entertaining as Annie.

i love this - it's amazing

i love the style you wrote it in, not just saying "annie said..." and "caitlyn said..."
u just put it there and people could figure it out.

and its a great idea for a story
like i said: amazing

Oh my god. I'm in love with this story.

ahahah/ omg, that's so cute! XD

I do that a lot. the whole "there's another person in my mind thing", except I call mine vILOTe.

LMAO that was such a cute story. Seriously, I couldn't stop smiling when I was reading it. Haha, great job :D

I loved the structure of the story. It fit very well.

Super cute! It made me smile bigger than like, half a watermelon. When its all flat at the top, and round at the bottom, like a half moon and/or a smile.
-Jacquie

ahh i uhm..like this alot
:)

i love it.. and annie :) it made me so happy to read... sometimes do that lol

I really love this story its hilarious! You should try and continue with it, turn it into a story rather than a one-shot, that would be awesome.

This is fantastically hilarious. I like what you've done with such an idea. And the quote really does wonders in drawing you in.

This was... so funny! And quirky! And charming! The dialogue in itself was absoloutely beautiful. It was just so silly and... hilarious! I also loved Annie's little narration throughout. Escpecially at the end 'We're not schizophrenic, **'!. Haha!

So favourited, obvisouly

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon

i've never read anything like it before. i'm enthralled!