Reviews for Conversation with a Muse

Reviews For: Conversation with a Muse

Lidless Eye 2004-12-13 ch 1,	Really really cool. Was really entertaining to read. ~Lidless Eye
poetic abortion 2004-09-26 ch 1,	How the hell do you come up with this !? Oo I swear you amaze me with each of your poems/haikus'. There just brillant !! ~ CrUcIfIeD bY tHe DeViL ~
insertterriblypoeticlineher... 2004-08-06 ch 1,	Fantastic poem. The structure kept it interesting and it flowed like milk. The way you use words is dazzling, 'willow bark tears,' 'insanity frosted cornflake cereal,' - brilliant. I would probably fill a whole page with this review if I tried to tell you all of my favorite lines. 'eyeing your soul over the/rim of her cup.' Beautifully unique, creative, and brilliant. This be goin' on my favorites.
Wasted Postage 2004-08-03 ch 1,	I like this one...it is sort of abstract in a way. Excellent work! ~*~AbunaiChikara Ps. Again, I am dreadfully sorry for the delay! Forgive me!
Lady B.V Rose 2004-07-24 ch 1,	Wow! This sounds like something the writers of old would write! Classic my darling! L:BVR xx
Children of the Root 2004-06-12 ch 1,	Very interesting, beany. I like it. Its strange. "I sold my soul for chocolate-coated expectations and sugar sweetened lies." ^Awesome lines.
GingerKiss 2004-06-12 ch 1,	I am in awe of you. Bows down in the presence of a far, far more talented poet This was simply amazing. I shall have to steal your muse, I dont seem to have one - I just listen to the voices...They have good ideas too sometimes
JJR Meerraf 2004-06-09 ch 1,	A little different, but cool none the less. Excellent work my friend!
Mime 2004-06-09 ch 1,	I actually read this at your LJ before reading it here, heh. I LOVE the unique format that you've created to go along with this. You have NEVER got to stop writing, you hear me? (FYI: In response to Kelpylion's comment...Calliope. I think. Calliope's the leader of the (9?) muses and the muse of lyrics. Forgive me if I'm wrong; it's been forever since I've done Greek mythology.)
glitterjewele 2004-06-06 ch 1,	AMAZING. i love everything about this, and once again the formatting is brilliant (you're really creative with a lot of your poems' formats, actually ~ it's cool. i shall have to call you The Brilliant Formatter henceforward :P) - i loved the little dashes between stanzas, they did a lot for it visually as well as helped the pacing ~ really great touch there. i thought it was awesome how you had the speaker and the muse talking over tea, hehe. :P and oh, so much jaw-dropping imagery . . . it was extremely tough to narrow it down, but these lines actually made me pause while i was reading, so i'll point them out: "i poured my soul out/for a drop/of gratitude," "willow bark tears" (somehow, i could taste that), "be careful not to step upon/the skeletons of mice" (my favorite of the favorites - absolutely ingenious, and so incredibly vivid, i could almost hear the bones crunching), and "the cornucopia of stale ideas and fraying threads." also, the ending, where you have 'Eyes' all by itself separated by the dash mark, was STUNNING. it gave me a chill. (lol i love reading your poetry, i'm in a constant state of shivers. :P) FANTASTIC piece, chica, hope you update again soon! ;)
Kelpylion 2004-06-06 ch 1,	Loved this...jumped around (in a good way), very thought-like. Fabulous images & emotions. Hm, about that title...how about 'Tea with a Muse,' or maybe 'with...' Erm, what's the name of the muse of lyric poetry? Haven't got my mythology reference handy. Even though you don't usually write specifically lyric poetry, it would give the title some interest. Hmmn.There ought to be a muse of free-verse! But I'm rambling. I definitely care way too much about titles. They matter, though, if you're trying to advertise a poem. Erm. Especially loved 'Blue moons, she replies, eyeing your soul over the rim of her cup' that stanza. Creates an amusing-but-fascinating image.
obsidian katana 2004-06-05 ch 1,	awesome poem. well written, creative and insightful. also, i love the emotions conveyed here and the imagery you use to paint vivid pictures with your words. wonderful. i like this piece a lot. nice use of metaphors as well. great job!
catseyeview 2004-06-05 ch 1,	great imagery with winds that weep and trees that tear. I love the fantasy in this piece.
Shinji Boi69 2004-06-05 ch 1,	This is very creative and very amusing. i loved it from beginning to end. i can't believe that someone wrote something this good. How long did it take you to get it just right? It would take me forever to write something on the same level as this poem. I like the title you chose too. Jake
Bigfoot111 2004-06-04 ch 1,	that was kind of strange, but good all the same

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