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| Sky Inlucy 2004-09-09 ch 9, | wow...your writing, i must say, gets better and better with each chapter. this is my favorite so far. from start to finish, it's wonderful. the description, the characterization, makes the reader really feel there. all i can really say, go you! |
| eat my megaphone 2004-09-05 ch 9, | Ian! I still love it. Just to reinforce that. But I do have a question. What are they THINKING. I mean, it's like you give me a breif glimps and then the light goes out. Your characters are SO amazing I want to get to know them! |
| Sky Inlucy 2004-08-12 ch 8, | Ah, it's great to get back on fictionpress and find some of my favorite stories updated, especially when I get to read some pretty damn good chapters. Loved the music in this one. Love Martin. Love the action. Yep. Bye. |
| eat my megaphone 2004-08-04 ch 8, | m... ian... more! lol, it feels unfinished. Get the next chapter up soon! By the way, Ian is aware of the place where he called 'Derrick' 'Dylan'... and I'm supposed to let you all know. |
| eat my megaphone 2004-07-29 ch 7, | Rik... how sad. I can't wait to see more character development. I want the band to get together and I want it to happen NOW! GO! I love you Ian! Keep writing; it's amazing. If you don't, I know where to find you... don't make me threaten again. You such a good writer... I don't want to see another plot go down the drain. |
| Sky Inlucy 2004-07-28 ch 7, | Your writing gets better with each chapter! I really like Martin. And oh crap, my dad is OBSESSED with The Flying Burrito Brothers, and The Byrds. I nearly fell out of my chair when I read that bit with Martin and Pete, hehe. Alrighty then, bye. |
| Sky Inlucy 2004-07-24 ch 6, | This is genius. I loved the beginning, as Rocky and Martin played "Stairway to Heaven", it's a really smart way of expressing where their friendship is at at this point (or...I could be looking way too much into it). Rocky is a really great character (wanna see more of Martin though!), you should be proud. Alrighty, update soon and don't take so long this time! |
| Infinite Abyss 2004-07-24 ch 6, | This is really good. Write more soon. |
| Eire Rain 2004-07-01 ch 5, | Hey, you have to update soon. This is really, really good. My favorite part would have to be at the beginning when you were describing August as a hangover and the cigarette after sex. lol. I thought it was really clever. Anyway, keep up the good work and thanks for the review :) |
| Sky Inlucy 2004-06-27 ch 5, | Ah, that was wonderful. What a coinicidence, eh? Martin and Rocky have great taste in music...Loved the way you showed everybody's holiday, and, more importantly, described really the atmosphere in the whole town itself. Please update soon, I love this story. |
| Sky Inlucy 2004-06-22 ch 2, | I am such an idiot. I should have read this a long time ago. It's 3:00 am and my eyes are burning, they're probably all red and bloodshot too...but I have to review before I get some badly needed sleep. This story is awesome. You've got a great gift for words man, you do. Very excited to see where this is heading. Update! |
| Sanqhian 2004-06-16 ch 4, | A good story. I like this. Please keep writing. |
| eat my megaphone 2004-06-06 ch 1, | I lobe it Ian! Almost as much as you! You description is amazing. It makes me feel sad and insignificant. I love the indirect presentation, and Rocky and Martin are to die for! You'd better keep writing, you loser! |