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| Carefreecat 2008-04-20 ch 1,   | I like this! It was interesting, and I thought it was cute! I think it came out well! :) I think it'd be cool if you made a sequel! |
| Flies 2004-06-04 ch 1, | Hella good. I like Holt's persona, I think he's cool. Kane is awesome too. I like how he zones off when he's supposed to be paying attention. I do that too... sometimes. You still owe me to read Harry Potter and That Guy, slacker! Uh.. and anyways, I would like to see a sequel! I want Kane to tell Holt that Lotus was his aunt. And for them to know eachother for more than 48 hours. Yeah. |