wow.
this is really good.
you havent updated it in forever but i think you should!!
this was an insanely good prologue.
update it!
=D

Write more, PRETTY PLEASE!

well i'm really sorry to have to tell you this . . . but you need some major help on your story . . . the idea is cute - cliche, yes - but cute . . . there are a lot of major spelling/grammar errors that you might want someone to check over . . . also, you went through the events way too quickly . . . all of a sudden he's tired of being famous . . . the way you go so quickly and without details shows your readers how unaware of life as a popstar is - obviously you won't know exactly - but you need to make your story seem more credible . . . just work on it a little and i'm sure your story will turn out great! good luck!

i luv this story and its very well written i am putting it as my favs keep up the great work!

Ah.Wow.This is really interesting.And gah.I love it.Continue it!

Or.Or.I'll stab you with..my pencil? :[Hahah.

But yah.

Iloveit.

Aww this is great! Go Jack/David! Lol it amuses me that his real name sounds like "Butt-kiss" *snigger* Yeah, I'm a child *ahem* lol

Rozzie

Aw, cute. Can't wait to read more.

-- sadie

Awesome plot! This really seems like an interesting story to read. Please continue!
- Tainted Tears