ROFL. very funny.

awsome very funny...and very descriptive...just like i am witgh my "very's"

LOL! Very funny. A bit too descriptive in the beginning though.

That was cute. I liked it. :)

Nice story, but the grammer needs to be fixed, along with the spelling. Other than the techinical aspects its cute.

LoL! How cute. Short and nice. However, I don't see it winning any prizes (Sorry, but like you said, you like flames. Me too). Still cute and with a twist though.
:D

...this is weird... lol - but i still like it!

Funny but it would of been funnier if you hadn't told me the ending!
I guess I would rate it Great since I thought it was good but I already knew what was gonna happen so you made it sorta boring but then I pretended I didn't know it and I guess it was great but I still can't believe THAT YOU TOLD ME WHAT WOULD HAPPEN! \ /
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