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| Pastrami Sauce Camel Soup 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI like when the writing is on the style of the writing. When I try it I goof it up. *Clap Clap* Well done. |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseHa! Clever. |
| Jemme 2005-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one alot. Its exactly what a Haiku is... really. lol |
| FadingFlower 2005-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was a little creative, but kind of meaningless. Haiku is supposed to catch a moment in nature, not the sequence of the poem itself! |
| David Stephen 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis put a smile on my face! A Haiku about Haiku's. Amazing and inspirational! |
| Da Buffster 2004-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOh w00t! Always wanted to write a poem about a poem or a song about a song or something. Not quite that clever tho :p Made me laugh tho, v funny. |
| strawberries'n'sugar 2004-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI don't understand why you like haikus so much... but you're good at them, so, so what? Well done, B. |
| vanburen 2004-06-11 ch 1, | abusecharming, i like it. |
| moonlover46(not logged in) 2004-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...never seen a haiku about a haiku. Nice |
| Franken 2004-06-07 ch 1, | abuseTrue, but theres more to a Haiku right? *Random Fact* The plural of Haiku is Haiku. Just thought I'd let everyone know. Anyways, this was good, I thought someone would right a Haiku about Haiku sometime, just was wondering who'd do it! Good job! --Franken-- |
| frugale 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseyou go dear poet remind us how to write 'em because we forget |
| Seeker of the Way 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was quite clever * I wish i could write haikus * oh wait ... I just did! |
| Shinji Boi69 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why just jet but this makes me laugh. Very creative in an odd way. *claps loudly* Keep up the good work. jake. Oh! I get it now! Sorry for my slowness. This is really good. |
| nowayyoullgetbackinmyheart 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI understand how it's hard to make a Haiku exciting but... It was ok. xE.Sx |