 Rozlin 2005-01-11 . chapter 1-smiles with tears in eyes-you're so sweet. i wish there were more guys out there like you. actually, i wish the guy i loved was as caring and Loyal and kindhearted as you. but i guess that'll never happen. anyways, i love your stuff. sometimes it makes me smile and sometimes it brings tears to my eyes |
 Vinsant Firepsyched 2004-06-12 . chapter 1You dare say you pray to God, when you dare say you do not feel love? God is love, fool. God loves you.
Stop writing your anger and your woes if they are not for her to see. |
 Jewel of the Wolves 2004-06-06 . chapter 1You reviewed one of my poems so I will return the favor and review some of yours!
This poem is brilliant. I can feel the hope, the longing, the bare emotion in every word... I wish I could write like that, with only a few short words conveying so strong an emotion. Wonderfully done. I hope you find the love you seek!
..::Jewel::.. |
 Arm 2004-06-05 . chapter 1im sure you will find the love that you are praying and hoping for and i will hope for you aswel. its a great poem full of raw emotion. going to my favourites. good luck on finding that love. i dunno why but i rele like ur poems so i added you to my msn list my msn name is weirdo2990@hotmail.com so yea i guess ill maybe talk to you if you dont mind. im a lil shy and i hope yu dont mind that i added you... |
 Lost loverz 2004-06-05 . chapter 1 Wow! I'm with you. I so really know the feeling. |
 Fabian Cortez 2004-06-05 . chapter 1This is good! It speaks such sincerity in its tone. Emotion, sadness and genuine feelings of love drip from every line.
Very well done to portray this this way.
Keep Writing!
F.C |