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| CW-nerd-12 2004-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseSuicide. It's a morbidly cliche topic for poetry. If you're writing a poem about death and suicide, it's generally not a good idea to go out and actually say "death" and "suicide." you want to show us what you're doing, not tell us. And you need to write about something more original than suicide. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abusevery angsty poems |
| Phillip O 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI feel a little ahamed at saying this but I cried when I read your poem. It was so sad. It was greatly written with great word choice. |