this is really really good!
i read some of your other works too (i plan on reading the rest after i review)
and you are an amazing writer/poet!
wow...
keep writing!
~Eglador
'Land of the Forsaken'
p.s. thank you for reading my poem! :-)

This is nice. This is really nice. i love it!
Good going again :D

I love it!
You're such a great writer, and i love your poetry!
~mia~

interesting; it's good