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| Aryon O Huine Child 2004-06-21 ch 1,   | Wow, quite a stage in life you must've been through...I know you said that this piece was a "wee bit exaggerated", but, hey...you gotta write what you gotta write! In fact, I really love this piece. What can I say? I favour angst. "Sugary optimism"...that was not sugary! Actually, it was a great ending. Not only that, but believable...ya know, without leaving your reader saying, "well that was a "too sweet I just might barf" ending". Really, the ending was very suitable. Overall, great essay. I honestly loved it. ^_^ |