Very good and nicely written!

wow, great poem.
Cali

i love it too :)

That's really awesome. And it's great that you have someone like that with you. Everyone needs a friend like that.

Already read it, but it is still so cool! The ending is soo sad. BTW, I think you should have left out the author's note at the end. That would have left people guessing about why the narration stops abruptly. But it's your poem, and you decide what to do with it. Can't wait for Deadly Waltz! (Hee Hee...)