Reviews for Covert Operation Progeny

Reviews For: Covert Operation Progeny - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

Frosthold 2007-07-31 ch 2,	abuseVery interesting. Makes you wonder why they want Noe for their program. She certainly seems very lonely -Frost
KimHua 2007-05-15 ch 33,	abuseI enjoyed this story. :-) I especially liked the dialogue at the beginning of each chapter - they were probably my favourite bits. As is the case with "kids become secret agents" stories, the story itself was a little surreal, but those dialogue bits came across as a lot more "mature" (for want of a better word). Please note this isn't a criticism, just a comment. :-)
SparklingStar25 2007-03-27 ch 33,	abuseI loved this story.Nice ending though.Now I can't wait to read the sequel!
BattleLust 2006-10-29 ch 16,	abuseOMG! i luv ur story so far! you have a few words misspelled but beyond that it is awe-same! Check out mine sometime. i only have one right now but the next should be up soon i just gotta put it in the computer. laugh always, BattleLust
Tower of Babel 2006-07-25 ch 34,	abuseI'm sorry, it was 33 chapters... Again, thank you. And thanks for taking time out to read my story(s).
Tower of Babel 2006-07-25 ch 30,	abuseGREAT STORY! You grabbed my attention from the very beginning and swept me away for 30 chapters! Thanks for the entertaining and exciting break from my mundane and boring reality.
Jesse Prano 2006-05-22 ch 33,	abuse-Pat's actions seemed appropriate as they had begun before Noe had actually left her "care", and said positive feelings had had time to mature.-The good writing (technical correctness), subject, relative large amount of originality, and of course interesting characters kept me reading this story. Well done.-I can totally see a sequel coming out of this, probably something to do with Noe's new life, a couple major assignments, and of course her illicit attempts to contact her family. It could be joined with a spinoff of one of the other characters (my preference: Stephanie), who would in turn help Noe contact her family.
andhearts 2006-05-21 ch 33,	abusei love this story!! it's 2 in the morning and i just finished this! i loved the whole idea of the training program. i hope you have a sequel. great job on this!!
k 2006-05-20 ch 33, anon.	abuseFantastic finish, and yes a spin off would be great. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
Phantom452 2006-05-15 ch 33,	abuseIts over?! Wow i must say that was a very nice conclusion. Im kinda sad that its now over, because i want to know which of the recruits got killed! and what happens to Alex!?I hope you'll do a spin off or continutation! That would be really great!Hmm...Pat's sudden change of heart seemed a bit rushed out, but it does mature the character to an extent. Meaning that you know she cares and shes finally letting it out. But all in all it seems appropriate. What kept me reading? Well the fact that i wanted to see what happened to Noe, like where she would go or what kind of life she would have, plus i wanted to read about Alex and their encounters hint hint hahah. SEQUEL IS A MUST! Excellent writing skills with a few minor spelling errors, but who really cares? You seem to be rushing the story sometimes, which may cause confusion on detail in later chapters, but besides that, i think you did really well. Congrats on completely Covert Operation Progeny! Dangit now i have to complete mine...
Dachande663-ff 2006-05-15 ch 33,	abuseA nice ending, the way it sort of trails of for the future. Your characters were all really good and I can't wait to read more. You definetly need to write sequel(s), perhaps different missions in Noe's future. (idea: maybe one of the recruits goes rogue?).A brilliant story, 10/10!
Kelaia 2006-05-15 ch 33, anon.	abuseGood in general, but your writing style in this chapter read more like a report. Apart from the bit about Noe's family, there weren't many emotions in it. However, I appreciate that ending a story is sometimes really hard, and you've done a good job. I would read a sequel if there was one.
Hydie 2006-05-15 ch 33,	abuseNice. Very well written.
Kelaia 2006-05-05 ch 32, anon.	abuseVery good. I just have one question. If Noe was supposed to die, why give her a bullet-proof vest? Good ending, though. I hate trying to write a convincing conclusion.
twilight-eclipse 2006-05-02 ch 32,	abuseyour story is great! it reminds me a lot of alias and i loved that too. no offense, but Noe could have done with a little more abuse. it sounds mean, but it would build more suspense and anxiety. otherwise, it was awesome!

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