good work! i also like this poem..especially the chorus and the bridge..i can also relate to this poem...you have an excellent talent in writing so keep it up!

beautiful! absolutely beautiful!
"I don't want million roses
I don't want billion skies
I just want your honesty
When you look into my eyes"
i just love those lines! i can totally relate. awesome job, as always! ;-)

This is a really good song. I can relate to this... U sound like me with the "I'll give you a cookie." In ur authors note at the top. lol. Please keep writhing and I'll keep reading.

This is a great song. I can sort of relate... not really, but in the past, I could have. Keep writing.

WOW! that was really cool. I wish i could write songs...then again i never tried. very cool.

that was so damn beautiful! amazing even! :D

WOW!...this is amazing!...i feel just like this right now so i can totally relate and understand!...once again WOW! FANTASTIC JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :)