Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: being caught in the middle of a loselosesituation
simpleplan13 2004-07-11 . chapter 1
I might clal it this time
I know this feeling well.. I like it! nicely done!
C. Faith Carpentieri 2004-06-16 . chapter 1
Nice. Telling two people you care for and know well to grow up already, school's over. Very good. At least you realize something they didn't.
chocolatecreme06 2004-06-07 . chapter 1
Tough situation to be in :S i like it even though its not ur usual style.
kalariah 2004-06-06 . chapter 1
It's hard being in the middle, isn't it? Both people expect you to side with them, and neutrality isn't an option.
I really like this one; the style is a bit different from what you usually do, and it seems a lot calmer. Breaking it into sections like that really enhances what you have to say. Saying "this time" gives a feeling of continuation, of weariness caused by endless repetition of actions.
Looking at the last few works you've put out, I think you grew up & matured while I wasn't looking. Your writing's always been excellent, but the attitude expressed within them before seemed to lack understanding of other people. Now.. I am impressed more than ever before.
And also, I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing much lately. I hardly ever get on FPC anymore. I still am in awe of your writing skills, and I hope you write a lot more.
Return to Top