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| Lidless Eye 2004-12-13 ch 1,  | abuseAgain, I liked the ending the best. Very very powerful Keep it up! ~Lidless Eye |
| The Black Rider 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work. Perfect rhythm and near perfect diction. This poem could work so many ways it seems. I loved it. |
| CoolBeans18s 2004-06-10 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! I love the symbolisim in this piece, and the imagery is so moving! The repitition at the end of each stanza really helps tie the poem together. Wonderfully done! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Sang Yu Nung 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was interesting. A lot of great imagery, and a lot of symbolism I think.. Great job, write on! |
| CW-nerd-12 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is cool. You should try writing Kyrielles, they have a repeated end-line like that, too. |