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Lidless Eye 2004-12-13 . chapter 1
Again, I liked the ending the best. Very very powerful

Keep it up!

~Lidless Eye
The Black Rider 2004-06-16 . chapter 1
Excellent work. Perfect rhythm and near perfect diction. This poem could work so many ways it seems. I loved it.
CoolBeans18s 2004-06-10 . chapter 1
Amazing! I love the symbolisim in this piece, and the imagery is so moving! The repitition at the end of each stanza really helps tie the poem together. Wonderfully done!
~ CoolBeans18s
Sang Yu Nung 2004-06-05 . chapter 1
Wow, that was interesting. A lot of great imagery, and a lot of symbolism I think.. Great job, write on!
CW-nerd-12 2004-06-05 . chapter 1
This is cool. You should try writing Kyrielles, they have a repeated end-line like that, too.
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