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| KIRARARA 2005-01-23 ch 1,   | another good poem! this is my favourite cos me and my friend r goin thru it lol. You are too good!! *adds to author alert list* |
| whisperedXkiss 2004-07-06 ch 1, | hrm...its nice, i just found a few grammatical errors...reading it over would help..but its pretty good overall |
| Sang Yu Nung 2004-06-05 ch 1, | I like how this poem flows, and how lots of the verbs are in "-ing" form ^^ Nice rhyming, keep up the good work. |