Interesting poem you should probaly find a better way to get the readers intrigued. This can be done by adding a rhythem to your message by that i mean make sure the words that rhyme are heard at a point as if they were on a beat. Theres not much of a way that i can explain this just keep it up nice poem.

OMG! That was awesome. It really seems like it would belong in a book of poetry that you can buy at a bookstore. Good job!

I love the end. Very powerful in word choice. I like the use of 'killed' in the last line. The book image is a good idea, but you did not sustain it. I mean, you only picked it up towards the end. If that is the image you want to use, then I suggest working it in at the beginning also. Otherwise, this is a good piece. Looks very personal and heart felt. THanks for sharing. Keep up the good work. Check my stuff out when you get a chance. I haven't gotten much feed back yet. Thanks!

Hmm... There's some grammer mistakes and misplaced words there that could be fixed for the presenation, but the story told is very interesting. Ha, I've never really had a problem with age differences, being used, yes, but not age wise. Very neat how you wrote it, the form could use some work but the content is priceless.
Congrats and thanks for the neat read. ^_^

Wow, that was pretty vengeful stuff! Was that being in love, only to find out that you had been used?