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oohaysemag2001 2005-12-17 . chapter 1
Try meditating on positive things inside your head.The beauty of the world around you life it self how dear it is.The starry nights, the moon that shine to give us light.The color of the falling leaves the beautiful trees.The air we breed. Creation makes life worth living.How much do we appreciate the things made for our enjoyment.

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ShadowChii 2004-06-06 . chapter 1
Wow...creepy cool poem. I can relate to this...I love it!
Summerdazed 2004-06-06 . chapter 1
socializing = pain?
well one thing's for sure, you're NOT crazy. :O) A lot of us out there feels the same. I hope you wrote through imagination cuz I don't want you to feel this way. I know how it feels.
Loved the 3 lines where each line is only one word. And they rhymed! Keep writing!
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=
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