hey thanks for the reviews ^^, I dropped by and I love reading haikus (and i really liked the last one of yours that i read, so i decided to read another one)... I liked it, especially how you put two haikus together with one sort of as a continuation... original idea XD, write on!!

I really like haiku. Your haiku definately makes my wonder, and thats a good thing. When reading something, one should ponder the meaning of it and why it was written.

Mm... those were both very good. I think I like Void better. I liked the way that it flowed, and especially the second and last line to it, those were really good. Great job here!

--Franken--

the first one has a flawless first line, and second one has a perfect last line! Lol, not that I'm a haiku master. I suck at haikus, so in the end they're both perfect.
review me if you're free!
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