Very interesting and intriguing. A little short for my liking, but apart from that I'm impressed

Spawny

Wow. Wow. Wow. I've forgotten that there are other letters in the alphabet. You are either disturbed or a genius. I think its option two, personally. Wow.

See, you're just scary. But this is a fantastic read, you genius, you. Consider being a pro.

Aye, it's me, two reviews in an hour, a record, um, are you going to add more to this? I love your style of writing, distinct, natural and not forced. I envy you..., and no, I am not stalking you, just stumbled upon your user and decided to read your works. Um, though I was a bit confused when you mention his friends, had to go re-read, -blink- It was kinda confusing where he was at the time. And yeah, besides that it ran quite smoothly, though XD it ended quite abrutly, -blink- I personally don't agree to the ending, but hey, you -are- the author! Yes anyways, nice work!

Hm... interesting. Very violent to be sure. Still, it was fun to read.

Wow, very… mysterious to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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Wow. I was going to suggest that maybe this should be posted under "Horror/humour" because there were some very funny bits in it at the start ("You never know, someone in concealing headgear wielding a crowbar might attack you. It happens." well, I thought it was funny), but then, what with the crushing of the skulls, that seemed a little inappropriate.
That was really well written, the best story of yours which I've read. I didn't see the ending coming, really well done!

Cool..

O_O Certainly a new perspective there, cool.