*blinks* well, since this is anonymous, I can't send an actual reply... but whoever you are leyfey, I'm confused. This is a free verse poem, it's not supposed to be proper grammar or anything. It feels like you're just writing a random flame.. anyway, I don't mind. If you had constructive criticism, I'd be happy to make changes, but since all you can do is insult me, there's nothing I can do about it. Oh well.

~Sara

It sounds like English; it even looks like English, but I can't understand a word you're blabbering. How about putting that into proper syntax, form, and grammar so that I can at least understand what you are saying before I dismiss it?

I don't know what makes you such a worthless poster, but it really works! You couldn't get a clue during clue mating season in a field of clues if you smeared your body in musk and did the clue mating dance. Reading your post makes blindness a wonderful thing to look forward to. I am reminded of something relevant that Benjamin Disraeli said: "He was distinguished for ignorance - for he had only one idea and that was wrong."

When god was handing out personalities, you must have been holding the door. You're so boring, even a boomerang wouldn't come back to you. You are like watching Amputee Field Hockey: pathetic, and very quickly disgusting. Maybe you wouldn't come across as such a jellyfish-sucking mental midget if you didn't have an intellect rivaled only by the Village Idiot's stupider brother; if your weren't so fat that when you run, you make the CD player skip at the radio station, or if you didn't have a face so ugly that even your mother didn't know which end to put the diaper on. Who am I kidding? You would.

In future, if you have something to say, just shut up.