(You forgot a word here that was in your rough draft; typo: "...and though [there] seem[s/-ed] to be no Birch trees in sight..." But no one needs to know that! X_x;;)
You know I absolutely loved this. This was wonderful. Like a finely condensed story haha. I swear, it's the whole "I'm too cool to smoke, but do you have a light?" chara that goes and loves whom and when he pleases. Beautiful. The irony of it all, ne?
Loving your descriptions; they've been very deep lately. "...marking them with giggles and lipglossed grins and a nonchalant flip of their bleached-sunshine hair..." Hahaha! XD
Love
~ Kit ~

Excellent ^^ Far surpassed my expectations. You have such a talent and a knack for this!
-Cindy Moon *)

wow...*blink* never knew you were like that arri... reminds me of something ive read before... Farenheit 451??

that wuz easy...
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well, let me TELL you...
OH MY GOSH! I LOVE THIS ONE! WAIWAIWAI! SO GREAT!
crap...i must slep...
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well, i love the part about servicing the bro in bed... ^_^ lol
well, flames are ebil and can go DIE!
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well, lloll i love this and leave it up...after finals more people will review...
ilikeit...it's great...blahblahblah..
but YOU NO THAT!
lol
ok hyper now...
must type...asdfjkl;ljk
well, c yoo~
baibai~_~
--keisi:D