This is really good and form the titles of your other work I'm looking forward to reading them too.

"Death was disappointed.

Hell was disjointed."

For some reason I just loved this. I'm morbid in that way. lol.

powerful... this is definitely the kind of poem that makes you think. I am speechless, and believe me, that does not happen very often... i only wish that i could write like this.

Hey!

Very nice, eloquent, and mysterious. I like! GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

You really are an awesome writer and I don't know what too say. Each piece you write posses so much passion evident- so much... hell so much beauty. I wish I could write like that.

About the poem. Sylvia Plath's influence is clearly evident- yet it seems too personal to be based on her works. lovely.

beautiful picture you envisioned. a great poem.

why are you so good at poems?
yeah... it was good, amazing.
what else can i say? you're an awesome writer.

the last line is perfect. i love it:)

Word of the Day: pulchritudinous
Definition: physical beauty
Very much a piece of awesomeness!
The bottom piece
"Life
Is an art, like everything else.
You never paint a perfect piece until you try."
Reminds me of a saying I used to, well, say: Life is an art. Critiscm is one way to perfect it.

::applauds:: AWESOME! Now THAT is a poem. I think it's great... You're an awesome poet.

Beautiful! i LOVED the ending lines!! you definitly have talent!
please review some of my work, i would super apprecitate your insights:)