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| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good and form the titles of your other work I'm looking forward to reading them too. "Death was disappointed. Hell was disjointed." For some reason I just loved this. I'm morbid in that way. lol. |
| callmebelle 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusepowerful... this is definitely the kind of poem that makes you think. I am speechless, and believe me, that does not happen very often... i only wish that i could write like this. |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseHey! Very nice, eloquent, and mysterious. I like! GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP! Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| Perfect Bliss 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseYou really are an awesome writer and I don't know what too say. Each piece you write posses so much passion evident- so much... hell so much beauty. I wish I could write like that. About the poem. Sylvia Plath's influence is clearly evident- yet it seems too personal to be based on her works. lovely. |
| rustupidorjustnotbright 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abusebeautiful picture you envisioned. a great poem. |
| fAtaL aPocALypsE 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abusewhy are you so good at poems? yeah... it was good, amazing. what else can i say? you're an awesome writer. |
| Impressionist 2004-06-10 ch 1, | abusethe last line is perfect. i love it:) |
| Questionable Chains 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWord of the Day: pulchritudinous Definition: physical beauty Very much a piece of awesomeness! The bottom piece "Life Is an art, like everything else. You never paint a perfect piece until you try." Reminds me of a saying I used to, well, say: Life is an art. Critiscm is one way to perfect it. |
| dust2dust 2004-06-06 ch 1, | abuse::applauds:: AWESOME! Now THAT is a poem. I think it's great... You're an awesome poet. |
| reflected translation 2004-06-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! i LOVED the ending lines!! you definitly have talent! please review some of my work, i would super apprecitate your insights:) |