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| Cedar Hawk 2006-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this story...everything is perfectly done...my cousin did drugs...heroine, in fact...he rehabilitated, but still...One question;i get the feeling that Maj is her father, but some reason...i'm not sure if thats crazy or not, but maybe i am... |
| Raven Rosegate 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOh God. That was so sad, not a dry eye in the house. I really love your style of writing! Keep up the good work! |
| ErgoSchmergo 2005-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI forgot to review this story (after finding you HOW long ago?) but I have several good comments. First, I love your title "Juxtapose"-to place side by side, usually in contrast. If you have a good title, you'll capture the reader. Second, your writing is beutiful, I wouldn't change a thing about it. Third, you ended it perfectly. (A lot better than My Life In One Sentence! hehe sorry that was a corny ending...) But I still love both stories. |
| fAtaL aPocALypsE 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseso very sad... stupid drugs... and the father... arrgh. it was odd... but somehow, it was... understandable. nice job. |
| Questionable Chains 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseYou can't tell right now, But I'm whistling one of those whistles you whistle when something happens to you that the only reaction you can get out of yourself is a whistle. Very Intense. And very insightful. |
| mint chip house 2004-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWow that was a powerful bit there...very...intriging..are you going to continue it or is that it? very well done my friend |