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Reviews For: Juxtapose

Cedar Hawk
2006-10-02
ch 1,
abuseI really like this story...everything is perfectly done...my cousin did drugs...heroine, in fact...he rehabilitated, but still...One question;i get the feeling that Maj is her father, but some reason...i'm not sure if thats crazy or not, but maybe i am...
Raven Rosegate
2005-02-26
ch 1,
abuseOh God. That was so sad, not a dry eye in the house. I really love your style of writing! Keep up the good work!
ErgoSchmergo
2005-02-10
ch 1,
abuseI forgot to review this story (after finding you HOW long ago?) but I have several good comments. First, I love your title "Juxtapose"-to place side by side, usually in contrast. If you have a good title, you'll capture the reader. Second, your writing is beutiful, I wouldn't change a thing about it. Third, you ended it perfectly. (A lot better than My Life In One Sentence! hehe sorry that was a corny ending...) But I still love both stories.
fAtaL aPocALypsE
2004-06-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseso very sad... stupid drugs... and the father... arrgh.
it was odd... but somehow, it was... understandable.
nice job.
Questionable Chains
2004-06-08
ch 1,
abuseYou can't tell right now, But I'm whistling one of those whistles you whistle when something happens to you that the only reaction you can get out of yourself is a whistle.
Very Intense. And very insightful.
mint chip house
2004-06-07
ch 1,
abuseWow that was a powerful bit there...very...intriging..are you going to continue it or is that it? very well done my friend
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