This is odd, frightening, unbelievable- I wrote a prose piece about this just recently. This is my life. I understand how hated and painful fear and pain can become saftey, and perversely comforting. How strange that I'm not alone.

i like this, you can almost feel the pain. it reminds me of one of my poems: "And I realizeWhile I’m crying myself to sleepThat I’ll never be freeBecauseThe problem is me"great job

~SG~

oh, i love dictionaries! fun to keep when reading this. no offense, just my vocab. is very limited :p and thanks for all your reviews! much loved! can i ask one favor: pls review "to you"? the newest one since its lacking on reviews. lol! anyways, i like your work as well. and i have tried just plain free verse before, its like my mind cant do without rhyming at least once, lol! the poem "didnt know it" has no rhyming at all tho ;)

Wow. I love all of the metaphors and descriptions. Beautiful imagery, and it really makes you think. And it is so realistis, so true. Great job.