I love it!! Every word, very verse...this is awesome because not only can everyone relate to it, it was beautifully written :)

jaded,~SG~

This is very touching. It really hits home. It reminds me of my time with my ex-girlfriend. But then again, I was the one "smiling the lie". Hey! Don't hate! You gotta see it from both perspectives...

O wow! i really adore this poem! It's felt with soo much emotion and i really applaud you.

wow wonderful!

Dwee...sadness that this has. The person who is worth it all will "never" make you cry (or so I hear).
Great work! Keep it up!
~ Little Dog Muse

Don't smile a lie! That is a really cool line! Thanks for a great poem!