Your summary doesn't seem to match the poem...

But if you were tryin' to make me sad - you did. So I give ya a gold-star (as it were) for Accomplishing a Goal.

Now I gotta go cheer-up, somehow.

there. better. no faggotship. this one's good. demented little nursery rhyme, dontcha think?

its unique...but now,ive got a really morbid perspective on nursery songs...lol...jke! its nice...

very dark and gloomy but i loved it

nah, that wasn't crappy at all. quite clever of you, actually... the way it went with twinkle twinkle the kid song made it kind of creepy. liked it much. three thumbs up!