Wow, dark, and frightening, and worrying, and wonderful. I love the second verse, I see that the whole new fervour is due to 'him' I can almost see her stubbornness! Wonderful work, thoroughly enjoyed it! *continues to stare at it, picking up things*

HI, I think you did a really nice job here. THe way you describe it is really well done. I like it, well done and keep writing!

Wow. The start to this poem I can so relate to. Dreaming of a world were you are loved. Beautiful idea. The last stanza makes this bittersweet but beautiful as the tragedy sets in. Great job and keep up the good work!