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| rainbowskye 2004-10-16 ch 1, | I think that it's interesting that you broke the structure at the end of the poem, it's a good way to make an impact with the part that's different. I love the amount and quality (because quality is obviously important when you're looking for a good read) of the description you put in, it really makes your pieces great to read, and if people read them you get your message across. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-08 ch 1, | i love the last stanza the most :) makes me smile. and thank you for your reviews. to comment; i know i have horrible spelling and all in my poems but as long as they are comprehendable im fine with them. and vivid memory was about when my brother told me he was leaving and never coming back, about his goodbye. tho he ended up staying after all :D... anyways, nice poem and thanks ;) |
| Ev3rlasting 2004-06-07 ch 1, | This is great, I love the rhyming and all :D its deep, really really deep. Good, great, super job :D |