Wow, excellent! I am definitely going to have to add this to my alert list! ^_^

How long did it take you to write this chapter? With all of descriptions and all...
The descriptions are excellent, however, I think that they are a bit...overwhelming. It is hard to remember what exactly is going on when there are so many adjectives and run-on sentences.
Well anyways, this looks like it will prove to be very interesting.
UntilNextTime
DarkSorceress
P.S- There were female Knights in medeval times; ones that did not have to disguise themselves as men. I cant remember what they were called, but I know they operated in the name of Christianity. Trajents or something...