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Rozlin 2005-01-09 . chapter 1
i'd cry for you...
Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-06-15 . chapter 1
thats sad! dont kill urself
Vinsant Firepsyched 2004-06-12 . chapter 1
I can tell you here and now that suicide is a ** up prospect. You kill yourself to be damned for eternity. If you cannot take hell for 20 years, can you dare take hell for eternity?
Just because life is **, doesn't mean you should ** your life.
LaFramboise 2004-06-09 . chapter 1
The phrasing in this poem is beautiful. No matter how bad you feel, or bad things suck, it can always get better. Sorry this sounds like fake little cheerful message. But I really do mean it. You are a very talented person.
Silvershadow666 2004-06-08 . chapter 1
i know how you feel. It's just always that people are so conceited in the world they wouldn't care if anyone died. but don't worry, you'll find someone. =0)
JustBella 2004-06-07 . chapter 1
very sad but good, you have talent, good luck it seems like you need it and I would know
Rose of Darkness 666 2004-06-07 . chapter 1
...Wow...
Change all the "she"s to "he" and that would fit for me and somebody I know...
This is great writing. The feeling that even by ceasing to exist in this world wouldn't impact the lives of those you are leaving behind...all I can say is wow.
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