It's cute, 'lisbithia, and really almost too sweet for me. Oh, the puns! the only thing that really bothered me was the word "cuz", just b/c the word itself bothers me. and don't capitalize "capture" in the second stanza. but really, falling, drowning...are we really that morbid? ^_~

This is cool. I read erday but I forgot to review. This poem was well thought out. I loved the format. It helps add to the feel of the poem. Keep up the great work. i love reading your poems.
Well bye for now.
Jake

that was cute and sweet...aww...look! i reviewed!