 KikaKazamarou 2005-11-03 . chapter 1This poem was really awesome. I'm not much of a poet reader, but you read my story, so i'm reading your poems! Keep up the good work! ^.~ KK |
 poetic abortion 2005-01-22 . chapter 1^-^ Great job !!
~* Noelle *~ |
 philoslove 2005-01-10 . chapter 1Wow, I love the imagery, "tiny spheres of big despair". Yes, it does reflect on what brings on tears, but also a reminder here, that tears of happiness is possible as well, and this isn't much evident in this poem. And I like the idea in " tears fall far when they fall from the sun". Really interesting... Brilliant piece of work! I find it very refreshing. |
 Forget-The-Sorrow 2004-12-31 . chapter 1Wow. LOVE IT! |
 Candiferous 2004-12-29 . chapter 1Beautiful work, again. I love reading your stuff. But, for some reason, this does not stand out to me like the others. It almost seems like you're trying a little too hard in this one. That's just me, personally. It only slightly takes away from the fact that you are a great poet. And this is great poetry. |
 Ariaenia 2004-12-21 . chapter 1You have such talent...yet another beautiful performance. |
 really_bad_egg 2004-12-09 . chapter 1 woww! "tears fall far when they fall from the sun" interesting concept. luv it! Now i want to read more of your poems! =P |
 Moroni's Daughter 2004-10-18 . chapter 1"Fall tiny spheres of big despair" -I love the imagery. Thanks for your review on my poem, What Is Reality! |
 Richmond 2004-10-11 . chapter 1Very very very meaningful, nice choice of words, amazing poem. enter review whatever hit it okay hehheh. yeah. |
 Just Passing By 2004-10-05 . chapter 1 Very touching and very true. A nice twist. Keep up the good work. |
 SleepDontWeep 2004-08-03 . chapter 1AMAZING SO AMAZING!! i love the line : fall like tiny spheres of big despair! well done! x
wud u mind checkin out some of my stuff? |
 mistaken identity 2004-06-08 . chapter 1Hey thanks for your review, that was one of my favorites that i wrote. I like this poem, it rhymed very well and it tells a different story than most, also on my fav list |
 Fabian Cortez 2004-06-08 . chapter 1One of your best without a doubt. Great rhythm and reflective imagery.
WELL DONE
KEEP WRITING!
F.C |