wow.. very creepy.. awesome repition and rhyming.. great job!

Woah it's been a long time since I reveiwed you stil you don't reveiw me anymore... think I'll cry j/k anyway this song was good but it's a little short.

Wicked awsome! I loved it
"The truth is but a drop of rain within my sea of tears
But I shall nod and smile on, pretend to hide the sneers"
that was my favorite line it was ( i can't even find words to express how awsome it was so i'll just stop and say job well done)

i love the chorus! its so cleverly worded! wonderful! its wonderful!

Hello. You might remember me, although most likely not, from reviewing one of your stories quite some time ago. I told you I would pray for you... And I have to say, I still feel like I need to. I don't know if you believe in God, but I know I do. And I can see that you are going through so much pain and torment. I will be praying for you. I pray that God will heal you from your pain. I can see it in this song you have written. This song, so beautiful, yet so full of hurt and inner torment.
Please email me if you feel the need. And I will be in prayer for you.
May God be with you.
~Kodiak
kodiak77@hotmail.com

jezzuz that ws good.. and thats all i can really say other than WOW!!

Wow, that was just like one of the best songs I've ever read. I'm in awe.
Oh yeah, thought you'd wanna know, I'm working on 2 ideas now and trying to beat my writer's block, so here's hoping I can.

Why would anyone flame this? Its wonderful. . .despairing, maybe, but wonderfully written. . .