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Reviews For: Incomprehensible
Forget-The-Sorrow 2004-12-31 . chapter 1
LOVE IT!
Ariaenia 2004-12-21 . chapter 1
All I can say is once again...Beautiful
l'orage d'absinthe 2004-11-24 . chapter 1
nice...visualization?
elvenstorm 2004-06-09 . chapter 1
Lovely simple poem with excellent imagery. Really like the ripple idea! Well done
Fabian Cortez 2004-06-08 . chapter 1
Nice flow to your poem about the ocean. A sort of foreboding feel to it.
Well Done as Always
I think you have a natural talent here.
Keep Writing!
F.C
You might like my pieces "Vision" "Moonlight Kiss" "Covet" & "Fairytale" see what you think.
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