Reviews for The Food Package - FictionPress.com

Maranwe Telrunya 2006-01-06 ch 1,	Oh, funny! What made you write about food?
putz-6 2005-06-04 ch 1,	These are great poems ^_^
Kalopsia 2005-01-02 ch 1,	HAHA I LOVE ZUCHINNIS!
Keith Andrew 2004-12-12 ch 1,	really funb to read i have to admit. Nice descriptions as well. Keep it up-Keith Andrew
CrazzafrazzyBaby 2004-09-02 ch 1,	I heard the zucchini was a crossdresser. ;)
Seeker of the Way 2004-08-05 ch 1,	yummy breakfast .. makes me want to stop skipping it! * ZUCHINIS! The whole squash family ROCKS! lol
PeNeLoPe89 2004-08-05 ch 1,	Heehee...god now I'm hungry. I just LOVE breakfast foods. That's the hightlight of my mornings. Then their lunch...my hightlight during the afternoon and then there's dinner...well, you get the point. Although I don't like Zuchinnis...I'm actually one of those people who hate it but I thought this poem was adorable! I'm putting this one on my fave list.
Bragi 2004-06-08 ch 1,	Both funny, but the first one doesn't flow so good. Try making each line have the same number of syllables. Otherwise, nice job. If you like poems about food, please read and review my two poems: "O Chicken Wing!" and "I'm Hungry".
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2004-06-07 ch 1,	m... man that breakfast one makes me want morning to be here and to go to Bob Evans ! hehehe great job