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Reviews For: Another Midnight Fright

stealingzephyrs
2006-09-25
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow! That was soo good! It has, like magic in it. And I'm not high or anything. It reads like a fairy tale. Very Nice.
OnceADreamer
2006-09-04
ch 1,
abuseAw, cute.
Osunale
2006-08-03
ch 1,
abuseLovely rhythm here. A sweetly emotional piece. The conclusion stanza is very pretty and provides a perfect closing. I like.

One line that bothers me: "a tiny hand parts open the door." Right there the movement halts. 'parts open' might not be the best phrasing.
Shinji Boi69
2004-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is cool. I like it when people write things when they are a little "out of it" j/k. This is really good. I liked how it rhymed. I thought that the rhyming wouldn't work out but it did. Keep it up. Great job.
Jake
Neko Kuroban
2004-06-07
ch 1,
abuseAmazingly written; it is perfect, almost... well, I feel like a fool to describe it in this way, but have you ever heard a song, so perfect you have to blink away tears, as if to keep your self from shattering with its majesty? That is how this made me feel.
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