Reviews for In the terms of a Shadow

Nails For Your Crucifix
2004-06-20
ch 1,

Nice message but it seemed a bit...cheesy I suppose with the rhyming. I mean, it woudln't have been so bad if it had been a traditional rhyming like ABAB or ABCB or even AABB. But having an A theme just left me thinking that you were using these words, not because you meant any of them, but simply because they rhymed. I mean, you're not simply the reincarnated version of Dr. Seuss, are you?
Cuz like, omg I would so worship you if you were. That would just be so awesome. But besides that, this isn't about a fox in a box who eats bagels and lox.
I've got no quarrels with the theme or idea behind it or whatever. That was good. I just dislike the rhyming.

Gruesome Reflection
2004-06-19
ch 1,

Hey sarin! i love this poem, very strong and powerful! good use of the format. You could never get me to write a rhyming poem! ^_^.
your manga pal,
loserwithacapita'L'

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