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| Trinity Valyntine 2004-09-20 ch 14,  | abusehey...you are a great writer! i love the way you narrate teh story and this song, it just connects with me so much, i cant describe. i only wish i had your talent to tell you how much taht song touched me, it truly is beautiful. thank you for this little peice of heaven. |
| Jagged Brainchild 2004-08-30 ch 13, | abuseI still really like this. Things move slow, but not in a dragging sense. Then the plot is original, which is refreshing. Even the shifts in time when Lexie is thinking back on a memory, things run smooth. Really great. |
| Jagged Brainchild 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's really touching. I like it so far. |
| Queen of the Nile 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abusegood story! My name is Lexie!! ^_^ I felt special o.o; keep writing!! |
| Slashzilla 2004-06-17 ch 9, | abuseA wonderful chapter as usual. But i noticed something. This chapter seemed to skip around just a little bit. Was wondering if you could work on that? |
| Dark Hime 2004-06-16 ch 5, | abusei love the story |
| Lisa Jane 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseR - I've taken it myself for three-quarters of last year, and while it was hell getting off, I managed to deal with the aftermath. I simply wrote that part from my experience. |
| r 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseRegarding the Prozac comment about taking it for months, well, actually it's more like for the rest of your life. Once someone begins to take it, their body becomes dependent on it and very very few manage the depression and horrible mood swings in the aftermath. I only know of one who was able to stop relying on it and it was a difficult struggle. |
| Slashzilla 2004-06-11 ch 6, | abuseAnother wonderful chapter. Keep it up, k? ~~Wolfie |
| Slashzilla 2004-06-08 ch 4, | abuseDude, this is a good story. I can't believe no one's reviewed it. It'd be really cool if Richard was Lexie's gaurdian angel. I'm awaiting the next chapter with bated breath. I long for it like an insomniac longs for sleep. And now I'm gonna shut up before i spout some total crap. Good story, neighbor. Keep it up. Wolfie |