Oh my..I love this story!! It's wonderful as it is, but it'd be interesting to see the characters develop more--or, perhaps a prequel type thing. You probably won't do that, but still..it's a great story! : )

Beautifully written.. with an EVIL ending *pouts* hehe.. I have to say that I like your writings.. keep up the good work with whatever projects you endever ^_^

WHAT! I thought there was going to be some vampire/hunter action! Like sworn enemies falling in love. Shame on you for getting my hopes up! You must write another or something!

Wow. That was a nice one-shot. We loves it ^_^

Well, the conclusion passed rather hastily, but other than that it was an absorbing and innovative story. Your characters are quite unique, pleasant, and appealing, however since the story was relatively short we don’t truly become acquainted with them all too well. It would be nice to discover what happens next, but since it’s a one-shot, I suppose I’ll go read one of your other fictions. ^^

hey katie i think this is the best you have ever written in our freindship and i hope you will keep writting it
it is better than telran and thats saying alot coming from mr, holly, concidering that i love telran
well sit with me at lunch sometime i miss our chats

I liked it, I really hope you do a long story with these characters or whatever you were planning. Great job!

that was very well written but the ending of the chapter was a bit disapointing; you should do another chapter, update soon.